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Well, I tried
This is completely fail as far as ficlets go but, dammit, writing Yukan Club fic is hard.

A Handful of Failed Confessions, Seishirou/Noriko -
"To think that you were really going to force Yuri to marry you. You are the strongest at a lot of things but you don't know a woman's heart," Noriko said, her expression direct and unwavering.

She folded her hands over his.

"Can you accept that this is something you are not number one at?"

Seishirou looked at Noriko's upturned face and gulped. A retort died in his throat. The look in her eyes made him feel foolish and small.

"Can you teach me?" he asked, mouth moving before he could think.

She blinked. "You want me to teach you about Yuri's heart?"

"No!"



"Noriko, I want you to play Go with me forever. With me and no one else."

"None of our other friends play Go, Seishirou. I could hardly play with them instead."



Seishirou took a deep breath and tried not to let his hands shake.

"I want you to always be happy," he said. "I don't ever want to do things that hurt or disappoint you again. I don't want to have to see that look in your eyes ever again."

Noriko smiled gently. "That's very admirable, Seishirou."



"I don't like it when other men touch you."

"I don't like it, either."



"I don't like it when they send you love letters, either."

"It's a terrible waste of paper."



"Noriko, I like you. I really like you."

"I should hope so. You're one of my very best friends."

Seishirou sighed and gave up.

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tinyangl From: tinyangl Date: 26th November 2007 05:15 (UTC) (Link)
Oh!!! That was SO awesome. *_____________* It's Seishirou and Noriko and ahahahaha! Poor Seishirou. I'd quote, but it'd essentially be those LAST THREE SCENARIOS. I was laughing so hard~
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 26th November 2007 05:27 (UTC) (Link)
Haha, I'm glad you like it. :D
pashoshi From: pashoshi Date: 26th November 2007 05:20 (UTC) (Link)
Why must they be so proper and clueless? *sigh* You did a good job capturing that, even if it makes it really hard to get them together.
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 26th November 2007 05:28 (UTC) (Link)
They're so hopeless. If only it wasn't so cute.
acchikocchi From: acchikocchi Date: 26th November 2007 05:28 (UTC) (Link)
ajksldjksldjSJKDFJDLFJSDLKFDF YESSSS

*GOES TO ACTUALLY READ*
acchikocchi From: acchikocchi Date: 26th November 2007 05:34 (UTC) (Link)
Oh, Seishirou! That poor, poor boy ahahahaha that's so them. AND I LOVE IT. ♥ ♥ ♥

thank you so much for writing this pairing, even them failing at getting together, because Noriko's cluelessness and Seishirou's failures are very entertaining, too. :D
4_03_am From: 4_03_am Date: 27th November 2007 01:18 (UTC) (Link)
OMG SOMEONE WROTE THIS PAIRING you're my hero ♥_♥

Ahhh, ridiculously cute and hopeless.
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 01:32 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you like it.
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thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 01:42 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
gothicauthor From: gothicauthor Date: 27th November 2007 01:51 (UTC) (Link)
"I don't like it when other men touch you."

"I don't like it, either."


AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

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Gothic Author
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 01:55 (UTC) (Link)
:D Glad you enjoyed it.
tesshi From: tesshi Date: 27th November 2007 01:57 (UTC) (Link)
"I don't like it when they send you love letters, either."
"It's a terrible waste of paper."


right on noriko! XD i like seishirouXnoriko for some reason.

"Noriko, I like you. I really like you."
"I should hope so. You're one of my very best friends."
Seishirou sighed and gave up.
LOL
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 02:09 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
partypaprika From: partypaprika Date: 27th November 2007 04:02 (UTC) (Link)
This is really amazing. I loved the characterization of Noriko so much. SO SO SO MUCH. <<3
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 04:10 (UTC) (Link)
I'm pleased it worked for you.
anamuan From: anamuan Date: 27th November 2007 04:42 (UTC) (Link)
XD perfect. absolutely perfect

"Noriko, I want you to play Go with me forever. With me and no one else."

"None of our other friends play Go, Seishirou. I could hardly play with them instead."

This one! Just, just. it's so perfect. I can see it happening.

"Noriko, I like you. I really like you."

"I should hope so. You're one of my very best friends."

Seishirou sighed and gave up.

aww, don't give up~
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 04:47 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you like it. :)
lawi_chan From: lawi_chan Date: 27th November 2007 04:50 (UTC) (Link)
AWWWWWWW soooo cute hahah poor Seishirou!! But looovely
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 04:52 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you like it.
lelola From: lelola Date: 27th November 2007 05:33 (UTC) (Link)
This is wonderful. It's short and sweet, and perfectly in character. You've nailed them. X3 ♥

Also, thank you for writing Yukan fic! There's so little of it, and it's great to see Seishiro/Noriko getting some attention. :3
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 05:40 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

I wish there were more Yukan Club fic, especially Seishiro/Noriko because they're terribly cute.
morloki From: morloki Date: 27th November 2007 08:01 (UTC) (Link)
*melts* Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute!~~~ Love this pairing. It's the Yukan Club OTP, for real ^_^
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 08:29 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you. They are totally the OTP!
mmestrange From: mmestrange Date: 27th November 2007 08:14 (UTC) (Link)
I love it! Especially since we have been getting mild Noriko-is-jealous hints in the Yuri's marriage subplot, and Seishiro's mild I-am-jealous-Noriko-is-eyeing-up-someone-other-than-me plot in the last episode, this fic is very apropos.
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 08:29 (UTC) (Link)
I'm happy you like it.
lihsa From: lihsa Date: 27th November 2007 14:06 (UTC) (Link)
Love love love. These two are adorable, and so is this fic.
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 20:31 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you for the feedback!
senorita_7 From: senorita_7 Date: 27th November 2007 15:09 (UTC) (Link)
don't give up, seishirô~~!!!

*dies from cuteness* I've waited for this pairing. *___* thank you♥
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 20:31 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you like it.
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