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24Hr Valentines Fic
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anamuan From: anamuan Date: 22nd February 2008 07:39 (UTC) (Link)
There was what looked like dried noodles glued on in the top right corner, too.
I thought this line was funny.

He opened it warily. The message read: "Happy Valentine's Day! Hope you're a better kisser now than you were four years ago."
until i read this one.

"Who talks like that?
XDDDDDDDDDDDd

His hair was sticking out all crazy and Shige had the brief thought that Kusano looked like a porcupine. He burst out laughing before Kusano could even reach him.
"Stop laughing!" and "Do this properly!" are also high up on my list of lines that made me giggle madly.

Shige still didn't get what the big deal was. It felt kind of slimy, like a big wriggly slug was trying to enter his mouth.
i. i swear i had a semi!intelligent comment (ok, so not even. but a comment) to make when i pulled this out, but i forgot it by the time i found my comment box. ;___; I'm probably going to remember it in the middle of the night and it'll wake me up and i'll have to come tell you.

"No! Forget I said that. I didn't say anything. Hey, look at the weather," Shige babbled, panicked.

"Shige!" Koyama gasped, wide eyed.

"I really think those clouds are really interesting," Shige said.

oh, shige. so smooth. so subtle.

"What do you want?"
i can feel the member ai. truly.

"You know, you don't have to make up excuses to get me into bed with you," Shige said.

"I could tackle you and wrestle you into bed instead."

"Yes," Shige said. "That's much more sensible."

logic ftw! Actually, that whole section of dialogue was incredibly amusing. i had a hard time picking just part.

AND THEN THEY INEXPLICABLY DECIDED TO HAVE THE SEX, THE END
... XD BEST ENDING EVARRR!

the thing i forgot is really bothering me. *thinkthinkthink* (<- we may be here for a while) ok, fine. i give up.
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 22nd February 2008 08:39 (UTC) (Link)
:D I'm happy you liked it!

Yes, Shige is the smoothest ;). He shows his love through crankiness!

I thought my ending was GEENIUS.

If you ever remember what it is you forget, you have this handy comment to reply to!
anamuan From: anamuan Date: 22nd February 2008 08:43 (UTC) (Link)
I AM STILL TRYING TO REMEMBER. something to do with the slug. and kisses. j;laj;fajl;ka I DON'T KNOW. ;____; i wish my brain worked.
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 22nd February 2008 08:45 (UTC) (Link)
I'm sure it's something deeply profound that you've forgotten. We are all the sadder for not knowing. (Yeah, I don't know who this 'we' is. My comment, it be on crack, yo.)
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