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Well, I tried
This is completely fail as far as ficlets go but, dammit, writing Yukan Club fic is hard.

A Handful of Failed Confessions, Seishirou/Noriko -
"To think that you were really going to force Yuri to marry you. You are the strongest at a lot of things but you don't know a woman's heart," Noriko said, her expression direct and unwavering.

She folded her hands over his.

"Can you accept that this is something you are not number one at?"

Seishirou looked at Noriko's upturned face and gulped. A retort died in his throat. The look in her eyes made him feel foolish and small.

"Can you teach me?" he asked, mouth moving before he could think.

She blinked. "You want me to teach you about Yuri's heart?"

"No!"



"Noriko, I want you to play Go with me forever. With me and no one else."

"None of our other friends play Go, Seishirou. I could hardly play with them instead."



Seishirou took a deep breath and tried not to let his hands shake.

"I want you to always be happy," he said. "I don't ever want to do things that hurt or disappoint you again. I don't want to have to see that look in your eyes ever again."

Noriko smiled gently. "That's very admirable, Seishirou."



"I don't like it when other men touch you."

"I don't like it, either."



"I don't like it when they send you love letters, either."

"It's a terrible waste of paper."



"Noriko, I like you. I really like you."

"I should hope so. You're one of my very best friends."

Seishirou sighed and gave up.

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tinyangl From: tinyangl Date: 26th November 2007 05:15 (UTC) (Link)
Oh!!! That was SO awesome. *_____________* It's Seishirou and Noriko and ahahahaha! Poor Seishirou. I'd quote, but it'd essentially be those LAST THREE SCENARIOS. I was laughing so hard~
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 26th November 2007 05:27 (UTC) (Link)
Haha, I'm glad you like it. :D
pashoshi From: pashoshi Date: 26th November 2007 05:20 (UTC) (Link)
Why must they be so proper and clueless? *sigh* You did a good job capturing that, even if it makes it really hard to get them together.
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 26th November 2007 05:28 (UTC) (Link)
They're so hopeless. If only it wasn't so cute.
acchikocchi From: acchikocchi Date: 26th November 2007 05:28 (UTC) (Link)
ajksldjksldjSJKDFJDLFJSDLKFDF YESSSS

*GOES TO ACTUALLY READ*
acchikocchi From: acchikocchi Date: 26th November 2007 05:34 (UTC) (Link)
Oh, Seishirou! That poor, poor boy ahahahaha that's so them. AND I LOVE IT. ♥ ♥ ♥

thank you so much for writing this pairing, even them failing at getting together, because Noriko's cluelessness and Seishirou's failures are very entertaining, too. :D
4_03_am From: 4_03_am Date: 27th November 2007 01:18 (UTC) (Link)
OMG SOMEONE WROTE THIS PAIRING you're my hero ♥_♥

Ahhh, ridiculously cute and hopeless.
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 01:32 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you like it.
coiled_iris From: coiled_iris Date: 27th November 2007 01:38 (UTC) (Link)
*FLAIL* OMG SOMEONE FINALLY WROTE THIS PAIRING. <3333333333333

This was so much win. Cute and hilarious and oh so true. XD
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 01:42 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
gothicauthor From: gothicauthor Date: 27th November 2007 01:51 (UTC) (Link)
"I don't like it when other men touch you."

"I don't like it, either."


AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

[DIES]

Gothic Author
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 01:55 (UTC) (Link)
:D Glad you enjoyed it.
tesshi From: tesshi Date: 27th November 2007 01:57 (UTC) (Link)
"I don't like it when they send you love letters, either."
"It's a terrible waste of paper."


right on noriko! XD i like seishirouXnoriko for some reason.

"Noriko, I like you. I really like you."
"I should hope so. You're one of my very best friends."
Seishirou sighed and gave up.
LOL
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 02:09 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
partypaprika From: partypaprika Date: 27th November 2007 04:02 (UTC) (Link)
This is really amazing. I loved the characterization of Noriko so much. SO SO SO MUCH. <<3
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 04:10 (UTC) (Link)
I'm pleased it worked for you.
anamuan From: anamuan Date: 27th November 2007 04:42 (UTC) (Link)
XD perfect. absolutely perfect

"Noriko, I want you to play Go with me forever. With me and no one else."

"None of our other friends play Go, Seishirou. I could hardly play with them instead."

This one! Just, just. it's so perfect. I can see it happening.

"Noriko, I like you. I really like you."

"I should hope so. You're one of my very best friends."

Seishirou sighed and gave up.

aww, don't give up~
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 04:47 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you like it. :)
lawi_chan From: lawi_chan Date: 27th November 2007 04:50 (UTC) (Link)
AWWWWWWW soooo cute hahah poor Seishirou!! But looovely
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 04:52 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you like it.
lelola From: lelola Date: 27th November 2007 05:33 (UTC) (Link)
This is wonderful. It's short and sweet, and perfectly in character. You've nailed them. X3 ♥

Also, thank you for writing Yukan fic! There's so little of it, and it's great to see Seishiro/Noriko getting some attention. :3
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 05:40 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

I wish there were more Yukan Club fic, especially Seishiro/Noriko because they're terribly cute.
morloki From: morloki Date: 27th November 2007 08:01 (UTC) (Link)
*melts* Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute!~~~ Love this pairing. It's the Yukan Club OTP, for real ^_^
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 08:29 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you. They are totally the OTP!
mmestrange From: mmestrange Date: 27th November 2007 08:14 (UTC) (Link)
I love it! Especially since we have been getting mild Noriko-is-jealous hints in the Yuri's marriage subplot, and Seishiro's mild I-am-jealous-Noriko-is-eyeing-up-someone-other-than-me plot in the last episode, this fic is very apropos.
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 08:29 (UTC) (Link)
I'm happy you like it.
lihsa From: lihsa Date: 27th November 2007 14:06 (UTC) (Link)
Love love love. These two are adorable, and so is this fic.
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 20:31 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you for the feedback!
senorita_7 From: senorita_7 Date: 27th November 2007 15:09 (UTC) (Link)
don't give up, seishirô~~!!!

*dies from cuteness* I've waited for this pairing. *___* thank you♥
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 20:31 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you like it.
joie_de_vivre3 From: joie_de_vivre3 Date: 27th November 2007 23:35 (UTC) (Link)
that last three are terrific! <3

I heart this pairing. It's one of the reasons why I actually stick with Yukan Club after the first two bad eps. but now the thing grown on me so much with its cracktastic elements. 8D

thank you for writing.
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 27th November 2007 23:38 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you like it! Seishirou and Noriko's cuteness is part of why I stuck with Yukan Club, too.
drss From: drss Date: 28th November 2007 02:09 (UTC) (Link)
Hahaha. I really like this fic! It's sooo cute! <3
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 28th November 2007 02:48 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
darkgloom From: darkgloom Date: 28th November 2007 08:33 (UTC) (Link)
Asfjkl Seishirou/Noriko. *_* So clueless and adorable and I love them here so very much. ♥
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 28th November 2007 08:34 (UTC) (Link)
They are so adorable and so clueless. I'm glad you like it.
asian_sweets From: asian_sweets Date: 2nd December 2007 01:57 (UTC) (Link)
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
finally someone states the obvious >.<
i'm hoping that the two get together soon >.<
they're the brains of the group >.<
besides miroku of course >.<
*melts*
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 2nd December 2007 08:25 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you like it.
mellowdee From: mellowdee Date: 2nd December 2007 08:58 (UTC) (Link)
Adorable. This was quite fun. :)
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 2nd December 2007 09:00 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
yum_gums From: yum_gums Date: 18th December 2007 09:18 (UTC) (Link)
"Noriko, I like you. I really like you."

"I should hope so. You're one of my very best friends."

Seishirou sighed and gave up.

---->toink...hahaha figured she would say something like this...hahahahahXDDD
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 18th December 2007 09:23 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you like it.
From: shirofukurou Date: 21st January 2008 17:09 (UTC) (Link)
KEEP ON TRYING >D
From: niu_hana Date: 25th January 2008 03:34 (UTC) (Link)

"I don't like it when other men touch you."

"I don't like it, either."



"I don't like it when they send you love letters, either."

"It's a terrible waste of paper."


XDDDD

Yay!!! I'm glad you wrote this!!! I love Noriko! She's my favorite character!
thawrecka From: thawrecka Date: 25th January 2008 03:38 (UTC) (Link)
She's my favourite, too!
gyelle9 From: gyelle9 Date: 29th March 2010 04:45 (UTC) (Link)
roflmao! it doesn't help that i keep remembering yoko's failed attempts at conversation with kashii yu :P
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